I'm wondering if anyone noticed the camouflaged faces the extra bugs, the miniature people, a little car in the illustration... (I go to such lengths for my readers, and then... sheesh.)
Right now I'm thinking thinking thinking that The Scorpion is an almost perfect short story but I'm also worrying worrying worrying that the punctuation police might come and arrest me.
I'm wondering if anyone noticed the camouflaged faces the extra bugs, the miniature people, a little car in the illustration... (I go to such lengths for my readers, and then... sheesh.)
I like the way your main character ignores the fact he has released a creature capable of inflicting horrible deaths and rides off to a winery.
Right now I'm thinking thinking thinking that The Scorpion is an almost perfect short story but I'm also worrying worrying worrying that the punctuation police might come and arrest me.
Yes, “that’s usually the way it goes”. Loquacity rules the day.